In my humble opinion. 
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Karen Corby: the 8 sentence bio.
Born in Pusan, S. Korea. Flown to MN to meet Mom, Dad, & (eventually) little bro. Grew up in SoCal. Nicknamed "Scorbs" by childhood pal. Studied at Stanford University. Moved to Seattle to be PM @ MS. Likes reading, hiking, travel, musicals, philosophy, gossip mags… Loves mac & cheese.
Cool! You’re really good Karen!
Chris
The second photo would look great as a high contrast black & white shot.